I will give notes, feedback and script coverage for your script, tv pilot

Welcome to my screenplay notes and feedback service.

Screenwriting can often feel like a long, isolating process filled with endless rewrites and second-guessing. It doesn’t have to be that way. I’m here to support you with professional, insightful feedback that helps you move forward with clarity and confidence.

I provide in-depth script coverage, analysis, and development notes designed to elevate your material to a polished, market-ready level. Whether you have a treatment, outline, synopsis, full script, I carefully review your work and deliver detailed, actionable feedback tailored to your goals.

My notes focus on strengthening key elements such as story clarity and structure, tone and pacing, character arcs and development, dialogue and thematic depth, as well as identifying plot holes, logic issues, and inconsistencies. I also provide insight into the overall marketability of your project.

You will receive comprehensive, constructive feedback, typically a minimum of eight pages, with honest and balanced analysis. Every note is clear, practical, and designed to help you improve your script effectively. My approach is collaborative and respectful, offering a professional breakdown of plot, structure, character, pacing, dialogue, tone, and theme.

Writers I’ve worked with have gone on to win competitions, attract producers, with greater confidence