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I will beta read 10K words of your middle-grade fantasy manuscript
I will beta read 10K words of your middle-grade fantasy manuscript
Hi there, middle grade authors. Have you finished your middle grade fantasy novel, but you need a reader's perspective before sharing it with agents, publishers, or readers? I will beta read your middle grade fantasy novel and provide thoughtful, constructive feedback on how the story works from a reader's point of view.
I will look closely at plot and pacing, character development and relationships, fantasy world-building and clarity, dialogue, readability, and engagement, emotional impact and overall reader experience, Whether the story feels appropriate and engaging for its middle grade audience.
You will receive clear manuscript feedback that highlights what is working, what may be confusing or slowing the story down, and where you may have opportunities to strengthen the reading experience.
Depending on your package, your feedback can include a detailed reader report, inline comments, and answers to specific questions about your manuscript.
This is a beta reading focused on the reader experience, not a replacement for proofreading or line editing. But for either editing, proofreading, or formatting, you can message me for that
Message me today before placing an order and send me your manuscript, and I will give your story a fresh set of eyes before you take it to the next stage
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Hi, I am Jordan Olayinka, a beta reader with over 3 years of experience helping writers grow and refine their stories, and also a book marketer. I help indie and self published authors turn Amazon Ads into results. I specialize in Amazon advertising for authors, with broader marketing experience across e commerce and book promotion. I deliver reader focused keyword research, spend controlled campaign structures from day one, and provide clear reporting on what moves the needle.
Hi, I am Jordan Olayinka, a beta reader with over 3 years of experience helping writers grow and refine their stories, and also a book marketer. I help indie and self published authors turn Amazon Ads into results. I specialize in Amazon advertising for authors, with broader marketing experience across e commerce and book promotion. I deliver reader focused keyword research, spend controlled campaign structures from day one, and provide clear reporting on what moves the needle.






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