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I will beta read your romance, romantasy, fantasy, thriller, horror or ya novel

Beta read of your first 5,000 words with a honest reader report and key feedback.

Delivery Time
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Service details

So you've written your story, poured your heart into it, stayed up late fixing chapters, and now you're wondering: Does this actually work? Does it land the way I want it to?

That's exactly where I come in.

I'm a passionate reader and beta reader with a deep love for fiction in all its forms. I read carefully, I read honestly, and I give you the kind of feedback that actually helps, not vague praise, not harsh criticism, but real, thoughtful notes that show you how your story feels from a reader's eyes.

I will read your manuscript and give you detailed feedback on:

  • Plot structure and pacing — does the story flow, or are there spots where it drags?
  • Character development — are your characters believable, consistent, and easy to connect with?
  • Dialogue — does it feel natural, or does it sound stiff on the page?
  • World-building — especially for fantasy, sci-fi, and speculative fiction
  • Emotional pull — does your story make the reader feel something?
  • Plot holes and consistency issues — things you might have missed after staring at your manuscript for too long
  • Overall reader experience — would a real reader finish this book and recommend it?

I read and provide feedback across ALL fiction genres, including:

  • Romance
  • Dark Romance
  • Romantasy
  • Fantasy
  • Dark Fantasy
  • Urban Fantasy
  • Horror
  • Psychological Thriller
  • Thriller
  • Mystery
  • Cozy Mystery
  • Young Adult (YA)
  • New Adult
  • Paranormal Romance
  • Science Fiction
  • Dystopian
  • Literary Fiction
  • Speculative Fiction
  • Historical Fiction
  • Women's Fiction
  • LGBTQ+ Fiction
  • Dark Academia
  • LitRPG
  • GameLit
  • Action & Adventure
  • Supernatural Fiction

Whether you're a first-time writer sending out your debut novel or an experienced author working on your next series, I will treat your manuscript with the care and respect it deserves.

I write in English, French, Spanish, and Portuguese, so if your manuscript is in any of these languages, you are welcome here.

You will receive a well-organized, easy-to-read feedback document, no scattered notes, no confusion.
Just clear, honest feedback that helps you move forward with confidence.

Let's make your story the best version of itself. Order now and let's get started!

Key details

  • Genre
    Romance
  • Language
    EnglishFrenchGerman
Special note from freelancer
I give every manuscript my full attention, no rushing, no skimming. Your story deserves thoughtful, honest feedback to help you grow. Feel free to message me before ordering, especially for longer projects. I’d love to read your work.

FAQs

Please send your manuscript as a Google Doc, Word document (.docx) or PDF. Any of these works perfectly fine for me.
Stella Editor

Stella Editor

Book editor |Proofreader |Content writer

I'm a fiction editor with over 7 years of experience helping authors bring their stories to life. From pacing and plot structure to character voice and dialogue, I work closely with writers to make sure every element of their novel feels intentional and alive. I believe every story deserves to be told well, and my job is to make sure yours is. Thanks

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